You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Love BaitView the full contextdbzfan4awhile (59)in #poetry • 7 years ago I like the rhythm and flow of this piece. Sounds meld nicely and give odd rhymes, which I often like. Nice work.
I'm glad to hear that. And to learn you cherish odd rhymes is even more liberating.
I love a good mid-line rhyme that just flows to the end.