WHY THE SKY IS BLUE? (Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge #day1)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

WHY THE SKY IS BLUE?

Why the sky is blue?
Was it the hue of the universe’s view?
As my soul that engages into
Making my heart long after you.

When light bequeath its radiance,
The breeze performs its mystic dance;
Sprinkled with puffs of billows,
Embraces the gray, orange or even the yellows.

Calling darkness to embrace the horizon,
Letting my memories alive in the oblivion;
The vanity when the sky meets the sea,
Was it the aisle of the ecstasy?

The ocean mirrors to its roof,
Above is the vast body of the sky’s loaf;
Pigments of shades that hid the shadows
Painted above are the stars and moon and all that follows.

Talking about science;
As light sprinkles into red to violet as all that defines,
To meet a point that scatters these few,
As our eyes perceive the shades of blue.

I would like to thank @d-pend for hosting this kind of contest and opening another door for us amateur poets.

Join the Steemit school
Discord here: https://discord.gg/hyfYQ9P
Become part of the movement!


(This photo was a stolen shot when I took the photo above)

image.png

I am a part of @steemitfamilyph. Join us! Follow - Upvote - Resteem - Comment
Be a member on our Facebook page -- Click this Link

Sort:  

When I read the title, I expected a scientific explanation about why the sky looks blue. I never expected to see such good poetry, @daisydelta. Keep it up!

wow, thank you for the appreciation :)

Hi @daisydelta, thanks so much for this entry. I really enjoyed this piece and how it began with the sky is blue and spiraled through the vortex of the poem all the way back to the sky is blue. Nice photos too.

You followed the guidelines well, but could you also add the Day # into your title somewhere? Also please add one small invitation link to the Steemit school discord channel somewhere at the bottom. :-)

Placing you in the Beginner category for now, but don't be surprised if it moves up :-D

wow, thank you for the tips. ill do it next time and i'll edit this :)

nice poem!even if i'am not so advanced in english i like the way you are expressing the beauty of the nature :)

thank you :)

I love reading poems. Nice work there! 👏

Thank you :)

..iba kana talaga daisy... Hehehehe

Kuyaw jud pag pinoy :)

Ahaha salamat

I know you really a great poet.. :) love your poems.. Keep steeming it @daisydelta <3

Coin Marketplace

STEEM 0.20
TRX 0.16
JST 0.030
BTC 65819.18
ETH 2655.37
USDT 1.00
SBD 2.87