Facet-dream of Self

in #poetry7 years ago

Facet-dream of Self


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If I consolidate everything that
Drives this driver, ever down, down
Into a spheroid cube:
shapeless lump,
Primordial totem, endless waveguide,
Phantasm of tension and bliss,

Could the grasper grasp such?
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Could the swooner stand as much?
Diamagnetic pulse, transverse flow,
Beryllic flash of cockroach eyes,
cobra tongue, epileptic encroachment
of a keen hypnosis that splices the
dreamer successively deeper...

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Into the grips of self,
Unidentified mongrel self:
Self that feeds on with
Table scraps and washes the
Feet of royalty.

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Self that unhinges the edges,
Plunging through interdimensional
Cell walls towards nucleus of myth.

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Essence of self unrealized that
Churns in alchemical kegs of the
Storm god's dank cellar.

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Rigor of self unabated that
Coils around sanity &
Squeezes it lifeless.

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Life removed was life restored;
Gazed I inward to die parched on
An absurd pinaccle or would my
Eager tale be ever heard?
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Spinning, revolving,
Ephemeral art of air
That drinks immortality
From its own chalice.


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Written by
@d-pend
10/14/17
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Art credit:

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First image—
"Turn the light on"
by SteveGriffith

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Second image—:
"Valmuene"
by IT-Hammar

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Your immortal words speak in hypnosis. Your strength is meditating in a transcendence with the cosmos. The energy of the impression captures the expression of our souls. Life removed with life restored in cosmic dimension - we are love. Life remowed was life restored is amazing comparation with life auras. Cosmic poetry is born.

Another fantastic poem. Wow. I'm amazed you can pump these out everyday. I struggle to simply get a few haiku per day—I can't imagine doing anything longer like this and with such imagery. Have you ever considered collecting all of these in a book?

At any rate, keep up the wonderful work!

Haha, thanks. I started writing poetry daily (again) when I joined Steemit four months back. The momentum really picks up when you make it a priority to create every day. I do intend to collect these and release them in a book at some point! Thanks a lot for the comment.

Love your Japan content, sorry I haven't commented there as I've had a crazy schedule. I used to study some Japanese, love the culture, and as soon as I get a good opportunity want to go over there :)

Thanks for the kind words. No worries if you don't have time to comment. I'm just happy to hear you enjoy the posts. It is great here, so I'd fully recommend :) Hit me up if you have any questions or anything.

And let me know when you get around to that book. I'll be in line for a copy!

Awesome, the more I read your post the more I follow you deeper and deeper down the rabbit. Will we ever know how deep the rabbit hole goes? I love this masterpiece @d-pend

Good question @rensoul17... I will keep tunneling down the rabbit-hole of self.. who knows? Thank you for the support :)

@d-pend people come and people leave this planet, but their actions are immortalized and continue forever in the minds of the people that were impacted by them. Very creative poem. Upvoted. @gold84

Great insight, indeed..! Thanks @gold84.

wonderful writing

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Something very wonderful, well done, my friend
Very valuable information
You are a wonderful person

Great words choosing .Starting line
"If I consolidate everything that
Drives this driver, ever down, down " to attract everyone . Love it .
Thanks for sharing.

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