On the edge of the abyss/@prydefoltz
On the edge of the abyss
On the edge of the abyss
I wear the color
from the abyss
on my shoulders
and a vertiginous fear
around me.
My tired brow
walk in a thousand ways
oscillating in the most liquid hour.
Sleepwalker,
in the silence of the stars
my tranquility flees.
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very lovely poem I too joined good luck ! :)
Thank you. You are welcome to Friday Poets and tomorrow, Saturday of Haiku.
Very suggestive images portray the desperation of a very sensitive being struggling with his perceptions of reality that color him with chaos and helplessness and the vision that there are no exits.
Sister, very insightful.
Superb penning, Cordero:)
Thanks friend.
Love the imagery, @corderosiete ☻
I particularly like the first half:
This shows me the speaker in your poem has been there in the depths of that abyss; he know what is like, and yet he's walking the plank.
Well penned ☻