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Awesome

The imagery is 💯 👌

Kneeling before your alter and speaking in tongues,
drowning in your essence as life escapes my lungs.

I love this the most (if of course, it means what I think it means) 😉

It was some cunning linguistics.

I fucking knew it!!!

Raiding the lost ark while searching for your treasure,
Degrading you bark while perched on this pleasure.

‘-Indiana bones’

-M

I couldn’t help myself, it’s a joke. Much thanks 🤪

Beautiful and evocative as always 💗

Thanks! I haven't written poetry in a while, but I'm glad my rhmer still works. :)

Wow. I got fixated at some point. This is an original. Each line says something meaningful and related to the next giving you, or making you understand what the poem is about even for a layman. Good job sire

This is absolutely stunning!

thank you so much, and welcome to steemit..... LOL just realized im looking at the wrong post, now this makes sense why u should that haha

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