You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Warm Again (Haiku)View the full contextcaleblailmusik (56)in #poetry • 6 years ago I'd like to hear this whole "one breath" theory! I feel like I kinda grasp it, but I'm not 100 percent.
You'll need to talk to @dbooster or check out the posts pinned in the renga room on The Block. You can find them in there.
Okay! Thank you! :D
The idea is simply that a haiku should be so short that it fits in a single breath. 17 syllables is far too long! I went over some of the idea in this post.
Aha! Thank you too!