Poem Bitter swallow | POEMCHALLENGE BY @Maragaretwise

in #poemchallenge3 years ago (edited)

Bitter swallow

Weigh nostalgia
Those who love are seeds and the mask
The canvas with imprecise plums
We hear unexplored footprint
Towards the epicenter of the song
Neither you nor I thought of anything
All our universe was nothing
Or rather something more than nothing
Because our bodies were already looking for
There is nothing that should be left
In the hands of luck
It came off like the dream
From a recovered childhood
That has no return
What was close is remote
And everything seems to be yesterday
And today is as short as a stamp
I overturned the dispossession
Like a fulguration burned in ashes
I lost your soul in your love
And I could not get rid of you
The sleeping silk embers
What you were when dawn
Imperatives like the misfortune
They left only this malicious portrait in their pockets
And just in my chest bitter powder of heartbreak
Well I love you forever
It is part of the rope of eternity
And there we still hang



Writer by: @Lilo21


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