Or Maybe I’m scared to be whole again | Original Poetry

in poem •  last year  (edited)


I have been broken since you left.

Maybe I’m fine being shards of myself.

At least, I tried to pick myself up

Piece by piece.

But I was so broken that I can’t figure where to start.

I thought it would be easy.

I thought I could forget.

But the more I tried, the more I lam loosing.

All what left was nuisance.

I felt like I was fading.

I felt like a tree losing all my leaves on the spring.

I wonder if I could mend.

I’m loosing my mind.


Maybe I’m scared to be whole again.

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try it with your voice and show us next time :)

I would love to know how!


It's a lovely lyrical poem! I love the description, and the picture it paints in the mind of the readers. And nice poetic diction — your choice of word is excellent and simple which make me to grasp the message you are passing across.

Keep writing, @therainbow

  ·  last year (edited)


And so I live by day and day,
who knows tomorrow I'll be glad you left.

Lovely poetry

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Terrific last line!