I think for the mix your doing quite well if thats the effect your going for. To my ears it has a very airy euphoricness almost like it's on another dimension, ways to improve could be once you have finished your mix and you have the output wav file, then open that file and run it through some eq and a limiter to get a desired volume , maybe the next step is to invest in a better quality microphone and then experiment some more with what your doing.