@JAMESGETSIT'S 'KILL THE PAD' CHALLENGE WEEK #5/FAMILY!!-R.E.D.-WHAT FAMILY IS TO ONE
Welcome to Ones Perspective!!
Artwork By: @scuzzy
How are all of you peeps doing! Big shout out to @jamesgetsit, came on and got it haha!! I have work which is okay and good I didn't happen to start more than a decade ago rapping either!
This is the "KILL THE PAD" CHALLENGE WEEK #5 - SPONSORED BY SMA ( This is a DSound Community Initiative ) and of course is hosted by @jamesgetsit!
I missed out on the last one just had to much going on in the world to have the space to do it, I love this weeks theme! I am sure that my view doesn't stick to the conventional sense of the word, but I am sure how you will be able to see below, that I at least make some logic or metaphorical sense out of it!!!
Artwork By: Primalpainterhealingart
What Family Is To One:
What it means for me, this word family.
Starts with my heart, and includes all of you,
Energetically one feels for every single one of you,
Is this keeping with traditions, when it comes to families,
I speculate not even close. I suppose, just how Red rolls,
Exists to bring everyone in from these sunny frozen hell,
By respecting all you unique spirits floating around me.
While maintaining tha ability to make sure disrespect,
Never happens directly to me, or any other being existing,
Cause. Ain't that what families for. To stand equally together,
Unconditional love to me is the easiest thing in this world,
Unfortunately one also knows I was born in a place,
Where most don't ever get to witness such amazement,
Vibrantly vibrating energy to every conscious being,
Why? Because all of you deserve to be here,
Simple truths like this opens up doors locked away,
Showing that if ya wasn't suppose to be here, ya wouldn't be.
So I give gratitude, compassion to the lost along the way,
And tough loving for any family member ego out of line,
Hating is a mental disease, rather dis-ease,
Of ones mind, keep in mind I say this in kind,
With love for all of you that I still fully am unable to comprehend.
Thank you for joining one on this magnificent waves we all are riding in and on!
Gif By: @mightymicke
Great entry! I loved the lines:
This is so true! Not everyone knows what is like to have a family!
Thanks, just got home so I am still have some stuff to check out!! Can't wait to read yours!!
Man, this is beautiful... No other way of putting it. You really raised some vibrations with this one man. I honestly feel so much better after reading that. You have a gift my dude. Really dope.
I still think you struggle with rhymes though and bar structure... I'd really suggest you read some rap lyrics and study some of your favorite rappers schemes and then let that influence your writing.
By having it rhyme for fluently, you won't be sacrificing what you are saying, but rather you will be enabling that message to really grasp peoples attention. Our brains are wired to hear rhymes, why? I have no idea, but they are... When you speak in rhyme you capture someones mind. And with lyrics like yours, you could really change some lives, I have no doubt about that.
Keep dropping them man, love what you write.
Much appreciated!! Yea slow process for me at the moment, I have lots going on. Soon I will be able to fully dive into some relearning of writing that has been lost.
Until then each post is just one step closer to obtaining the goal!
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