Amusement and loneliness
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The sun is shining‚ The birds are flying what a beautiful and elegant scene it seems to be. The birds are playing‚ they're chasing each other. The site is very lovely.
What I feel |
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They are giving us a beautiful and friendly vibe. I wish that I could be them. They look so lovely and the birds' nature is friendly and pure. They fly freely in the sky having no worries in their mind. They fly without fear. They don't hate each other. If we talk about humans‚ they have jealousy‚ superiority and inferiority complex.
You know the biggest fact about birds‚ when they are in danger all other birds come to help. In the case of humans if someone is dying‚ weeping. They let them do so and show that they have no concern with each other.
I remember that once I went on a trip and I got fainted. The class group was seeing me and sitting in front of me. When I came to my senses I was crying and I saw that they were sitting in front of me and laughing. From that day I thought where the humanity goes? How much cruelty the humans have?
Just like the picture of how the birds are with each other. Despite they can fly away from each other they are united and playing like a group. How if the human could have that unity life would be different.
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He seemed to be worried having no charm‚ no amusement. He's just sitting lonely at the seaside. There's no one around. The sun had drowned‚ the clouds had appeared. It seemed that a cool breeze would be blown at any moment.
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I feel that if someone is drowning in emotions‚ he looks like he is having anxiety‚ stress issues‚ headaches. How a person can handle this stuff at once? By going through suffering. He wishes to die no matter how the lovely weather is. If the heart is not happy‚ when the mind is not satisfied then who cares about the weather? As we know anxiety issues and stress is too much nowadays. Yesterday‚ my friend called me and said that she has anxiety issues. I handled three to four cases of anxiety and all said that they have headaches and they can't sleep. We don't know how to handle our problems that's why we are fed up with life and we seem that we are tired.
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ALLAH HAFIZ TAKE CARE 🍀❤️ |
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The description you make in the first photo is very graphic and you share what it makes you feel, freedom, accompaniment. Certainly humans can lack empathy.
As far as I can highlight, your beginning is very good, I can recommend doing the narration in the first person, this will give more strength to your words, for example, instead of "they give us a very beautiful vibe", you can say directly: I feel a very beautiful vibe! You will notice how it improves.
As for the second image, your writing is very good, it undoubtedly conveys well what you wanted to express.
The first link you placed does not direct to that image, please check it, I recommend that you check the links after you place them.
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Oh that was a little bit mistake I have copied the link but paste another one. Thanks for correction. Moreover I have corrected that link.
Thank you so much for your guidance it means a lot to me. You are such supportive and kind heart just as @wakeupkitty. Thanks for responding and guiding. May ALLAH ALMIGHTY bless you ❤️🍀
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I am curious why you used each photo twice
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First one is collage of two pics that I edit from Canva by writing topic on it.
Below I use separate images to explain so there will no confusion.😊
Why you need the collage?
Yup there is no need that's why I deleted.😊
I guess it was meant to be as an editorial picture, kind of a thumb for the whole article. I always create this editorial picture in every article I make.
And it made me feel weird that you don't like it.
Justamente sentí lo mismo al analizar las imágenes en una expresa amor, unidad y esperanza.
Mientras la otra muestra tanta desesperación e incertidumbre.
Me gustó tu interpretación.
Muchos éxitos 👍
Thanks😊
Este ejercicio es muy interesante, pues te permite agudizar el sentido de la vista y conectarlo con las emociones. Los seres humanos somos muy visuales. Pero a veces solo vemos, y no observamos detalles. Y eso lo diferencia con el artista, quien no solo ve y observa, sino que además "crea a partir de imágenes" con la magia de las palabras. Desde mi punto de vista, has realizado una participación reflexiva muy interesante, en la que valoras la "condición humana" y la comparas con el comportamiento de las aves. Además, a partir del gesto del alienígena lograste servirnos un banquete sobre las emociones humanas. Buen trabajo. Te deseo suerte.
But if a person knows you. You consider her a good friend. When she gets minor cut you curious and worried for her and when time came to you you fainted and that friend is standing just and seeing you. Some people have Lack of Humanity
Thankusomuch 🤗
Así es, jiya99. Hay para todos los gustos.
Reading this post gave me many thoughts. First of all, I really enjoyed understanding the details of your photos and the emotions associated with them. You have beautifully described the freedom of birds, their love and the beauty of caring for each other. It really makes you think about how cold we humans are towards each other in our lives.
The feelings of loneliness and despair are also beautifully depicted in the second picture. The way you have described the stress and anxiety issues is really touching. These problems have become very common in today's times and most people fail to find ways to deal with them.
Overall, your writing seems to have depth and truth, which makes readers think. May Allah grant you more success.
Thankusomuch for this kind and appreciated reply. In this era kindness sincerity affection are difficult to find.
Same here may ALLAH bless you too with HIS all blessings 😊⭐✨
Thank you so much for best wishes🌟🌟☀👍
I enjoy reading your post; you and I see the image from similar angles. Good luck in the contest.
Thanks😊✨