My writing story competition 117 according to a digital image made by @xpilar

in WORLD OF XPILAR2 years ago

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AILSA


People usually talk about Atlantis, that imposing island with great military power, but they tend to forget Ailsa, a smaller island with an even greater secret, which unfortunately was also the reason for its disappearance... With these words, Pedro, an old storyteller from the village, used to begin his tale.

Ailsa was an island located near Atlantis, its inhabitants enjoyed one of the greatest privileges of all, a total and fully healthy life, its mortality rate in 100 years was negative and the birth rate was considered one of the best and there was a reason for this.

It was said that beneath its waters they treasured a great secret. Although their life seemed the same as everyone else's, they had an element which the other inhabitants of the world did not have and which had been kept among them from generation to generation. This element was _Respect for Mother Nature and her creatures_. They loved, respected and cared for every element of Nature because it represented Life, their most precious resource which was at the same time the foundation on which their beloved Ailsa, their home, rested.

They used the power of the waters to create the energy they needed. The fruits of the earth for their food, their work utensils were made of organic materials in order to avoid contamination. In this way they kept in harmony with nature.

Centuries later, the spiritual values of the inhabitants of Ailsa began to change, its caretakers became flexible and its inhabitants uncaring. The hearts of the regents and great authorities began to be filled with greed and ambition and everything began to change.

Ailsa was founded on a great rock, that rock was called by the Elders the "Rock of Life" because they believed it possessed special powers that had allowed them the life they had led so far. Some of its inhabitants began to forget the values of life and teachings and soon, tourism, which was only for adventure and recreation, became a way of dismembering the foundations of the island. Its own people began to sell off, piece by piece, the foundation of their home.

With the passage of time and the continuous extractions, the earth ceased to have the same capacity for fertility and the quakes began to get stronger and stronger. The people were no longer happy, they began to see sick and weak people, but this was no reason to reflect and even less reason to stop hurting the Rock of Life.

One dawn, the darkest of all, when everyone was still asleep, the foundations finally gave way, no one saw it coming. That day Ailsa succumbed to the greed of some and the carelessness of many and began to sink hopelessly, without stopping, and with it its inhabitants. All paid a high price for having given way to ambition and went to the depths of the sea. There was no time for crying or mourning. They all left with sleep still in their eyes.

It is said that even today, if you are a good observer, you can still see the lights that come on when the sea is very dark.

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 2 years ago 

What a lovely story you wrote my friend @esthersanchez Congratulations, your interesting post has been upvoted by @petface, who is on the hunt for unique, quality content here in the WORLD OF XPILAR. I wish you all the best of luck in the writing story contest and I will keep an eye out for the results hoping to see it shortlisted there. Cheers.

Hi there!
How nice of you to visit me!
I appreciate your support and your meticulous ant-like work, contagious to all of us with your gratifying energy! Blessings dear @pettface!

Hola @esthersanchez, Tremendo relato me gusto desde su principio hasta su final, tiene varios mensaje importantes, y para mí el más significativo es eso que si "eres buen observador puedes ver las luces que se encienden..." Cuantas desgracias se pueden comenter a favor de codicia pero si sólo un poco de luz podemos ver seguro que esa parte pequeña de lo que fue valioso aún brilla, las cosas que hacemos bien con mucho esmero aunque se hundan siempre tendrán luz detrás aunque no lo parezca, y una oportunidad cada día para repararlas.

Hola!
Gracias por pasarte y leer mi contenido. En definitiva el mensaje es: "más amor por lo natural y por lo que, sin pedir más que cuidado y protección nos brinda bienestar y mejores condiciones de vida! Lo demás es solo polvo en el viento.
Un gran abrazo @styngrey!

Gracias!

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