You haven't given a single vote or comment in last 7 days. This is not a good practice. You should give atleast 10 votes and leave 5 meaningful comments on others posts.

Before publishing your post, please read and correct all the spelling mistakes. There are many mistakes in this post.

Instead of writing long paragraphs, split them into smaller ones. This makes the post more readable.

It would be great if you invite your cousin to Steemit. He seems to have great art skills.