You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #8View the full contextmanoldonchev (69)in #haikucontest • 6 years ago We met by the shore She was afraid of the deep It came from behind
You told a story in 17 syllables! But "It" was a well intentioned monster, it wanted only take a pic (lol!)
You also made me laugh, though :) I can totally relate to this 'It' when it comes to photographing wildlife.
Jeez, don't go on dates with this dude ;)
I feels as if you have actually read my other option for the last line - the one I did not publish ;)
as if this one isn't promising enough, but now I really want to know, or maybe really don't...
Well, I think I ruined it already, but for curiosity's sake:
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'There're other birds'