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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #15
Rages the old flame
Those new lights have not the warmth
Nor the smell of wood
Rages the old flame
Those new lights have not the warmth
Nor the smell of wood
The contrast between natural and artificial is an interesting interpretation, which I see more than one of you used.
The first verse, "rages the old flame", sounds like an ancient fairy tale told around the fire.