Original Haiku #1 - The Night
"Haiku is a very short form of Japanese poetry. It is typically characterized by three qualities"
The essence of haiku is "cutting" (kiru). This is often represented by the juxtaposition of two images or ideas and a kireji ("cutting word") between them, a kind of verbal punctuation mark which signals the moment of separation and colours the manner in which the juxtaposed elements are related.
Traditional haiku consist of 17 on (also known as morae though often loosely translated as "syllables"), in three phrases of 5, 7, and 5 on, respectively. (An alternative form of haiku consists of 11 on in three phrases of 3, 5, and 3 on, respectively.)
A kigo (seasonal reference), usually drawn from a saijiki, an extensive but defined list of such terms.
the place is peaceful again
close your dreary eyes
i'll be glad if i see comments cause i knew i didn't fail to create a good Haiku.
My Other Original Haiku:
Original Haiku #1 -"The Night"
Original Haiku #2 -"Little One"
Original Haiku #3 -"The War"
Original Haiku #4 -"Old Branch"
Original Haiku #5 -"Winter"
Original Haiku #6 -"La Luna"
Original Haiku #7 - "Burgeon"
Original Haiku #8 - "Peroration"
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thanks :) appreciated it good sir/mam it's nice to have a nice audience for my haiku even though im just starting
Its nice and catchy iys like appreciating the stars and the clear night sky
thanks kuya :D
Nice haiku @memeitbaby, I loved how the finishing blow was delivered...
Im flattered when i read this comment coming from a super good writer ! Thanks @jamesanity06 :D
This is very nice @memeitbaby! Keep exploring other niche, let's see if you can victor in more than one. I like the fact that you keep on challenging yourself. So, learn more and grow more!
The challenge in writing Haiku is bringing so much emotion with few words. Good job as you were able to deliver such.
Yet another one of a great poetry author ^^ im so flattered :) i will sure improve my skills on making haiku
Nice po :D
As you can imagine, me being a fan of Japanese Culture as a whole I've heared of Haiku but have never practiced it myself.
Good post, you actually got me wondering if I can write my own haiku too
Sure you can do it too .. just believe at yourself and follow the traditional rules ^^
definitely will try with my next pieces of art