Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #12

in #fuerza-hispana5 years ago (edited)

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Hola a todos y todas, de nuevo presentando un Haiku. Composición poética escueta y en apariencia sencilla, pero que bien trabajada puede encerrar un peso infinito en su contenido. Si todavía no conoces el concurso de Haikus de @bananafish, te invito a visitarlo aquí. Anímate a filosofar con los participantes y asistentes. La cultura japonesa es sin duda atractiva y ahí encontraras un maravilloso entorno para el acercamiento a ésta.

Mi lengua es el español y así ha sido escrito originalmente mi poema. Todas las traducciones que encontraréis las realizo usando la web de Deelp, y luego revisando en la medida de mis posibilidades. Recordamos que un Haiku se compone de tres versos, con métrica 5-7-5.

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Hello everyone, again presenting a Haiku. Poetic composition short and simple in appearance, but that well worked can enclose an infinite weight in its content. If you still don't know the @bananafish Haikus contest, I invite you to visit it here. Encourage yourself to philosophize with the participants and attendees. Japanese culture is undoubtedly attractive and there you will find a wonderful environment for approaching it.

My language is Spanish and this is how my poem was originally written. All the translations you will find I do using the Deelp website, and then reviewing as much as I can. We remember that a Haiku is composed of three verses, with metrics 5-7-5.

[photo by @marcoriccardi ]


Seres humanos:
inercia desbocada
por todas partes.

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These are human beings:
just unbridled inertia
all over the place.

Como masa nos movemos... la mayor parte del tiempo, sin saberlo. || As a mass we move... most of the time, without knowing it.

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Yo creo que este haiku (por su ironía y por su contenido de observación social, debería caer en la definición de senryū) tiene dos niveles de interpretación que coexisten: el visual, en el que las líneas cinéticas representadas por la barra en el centro y por el diseño del piso dan la sensación de una rotación y, por lo tanto, de una fuerza centrífuga; y la social, como se explica en las líneas que escribiste al final del post.

Wow tu comentario me parece super interesante. ¡Muchas gracias!

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