I say nothing except that this is not a story so the hashtags used are wrong and @joslud and @solperez should have a look at it.

Alright, I'll say something...
Are you able to write a short story? I believe your main problem is/was that you don't read the instructions or forget about them and enthusiastically type on. But each story can be made shorter, that's what editors do or a publisher tells you to do.

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