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RE: On the edge of the bridge / Al borde del puente

in Freewriters2 years ago


Dear Free Writer,

We continue our #wewrite journey. Keep in mind this is a learning experience for all of us and feedback is important. Have fun and don't forget to read your comments, they can be very useful. Below you find the review of your publication which is part of We-Write-Lesson 5.

CriteriaResult
What went well - 1 point1
What to improve-
Misunderstanding-
Title - 2 point2
Hashtags - 1 points1
A flashy start - 2 points2
Creativity / out-of-the-box thinking - 3 points3
Original/no AI text👍
Following the rules - 1 point1
Total max 10 points10
Verification date:October 12, 2024

Wordcount: 47 (50 in EN)

A taxi ran over him... what shall I say? What a surprise. It sounds like a perfect solution. Are we both into death?

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Por lo visto, la muerte le andaba coqueteando. En el puente no lo logró seducirlo por completo, pero el azar se encargó de hacer el trabajo.

Gracias por la validación. Un abrazo.

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