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RE: Big Chance of Opportunity Opened
Its not a poem, I am not a poet . It might be a prayer. I am just closing my eyes, wrote what popped up in my mind as I consider a freewrite. I wrote and post based on the story of my life, either the outcome became a poem or a prayer. Thank you for coming. I told @wakeupkitty that I was sonafrsid of writing in freestyle because I thought it's always about poetry . I don't like fiction too. It's up to you to describe it, what I can say, its the word from my heart and mind.
The first part is my language, I am a Filipina (Philippines) and honestly I am not a good writer too and I know there are some issue about grammar or whatever. Again thank you @hefestus
Thanks for the answer. About the grammar... Keep practicing. You're not so bad at it and are quite readable. I just wondered if it was a poem because, when you translate whatever language into english, it looses a lot of the original music and rhymes, but I did enjoy your writing. :)
Steem on!
Thank you for the advice and I will improve little by little in perfect time. I am not a poet so I wrote just what is in my mind. And real life story is my best choice in blogging.