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RE: Fons Principalis Tristitiae Est Memoria [Bilingual EN & ID]
I obviously had no talent in this area. I have too little vocabulary to use, like a child who has just learnt to talk. Ha! Thank you for correcting me, although I think there's more to criticise in this post than repetition of words.
This is the first thing I noticed.
You have a talent and it was good to read, just when the same word is repeated too quickly in succession, reads are less fluent making texts boring. Everything can be learnt. You write good commentaries. Write stories the same way.
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Super comment! Now I love you even more, just a pity it's orange, let me know where it stands for hopefully not a woke hearth to wake up kitty.
Happy Sunday
whats wrong with the Orange color?
Nothing if it's the orange juice you serve.
Btw you didn't answer the questions!