"Filthy Rich" a five minute freewrite

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This is the freewrite challenge. I am using @mariannewest’s #freewrite prompt to write this piece (https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-539-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-filthy-rich)

Today’s prompt is:

filthy rich

I am continuing a story I began a few days ago (this is part six). You can find parts one and two and three and four and fiveif you are interested

"I think they've gone," Marie said, her head turned, her breath hot on my ear. "Let's keep going. But keep watching. They'll be back."

I nodded and we inched forward, shining our torches around us. The beam picked out the pile of dust that once had been Chip and beside him the device he had been carrying. I bent down and picked it up, slipping it into my pocket, a tear rolling down my face.

How had I ever let him talk me into this?

"I know this guy," he had said, taking a long slug of the malty energy drink he favoured after a workout. "Clever man, filthy rich too. He needs a team to do something for him."

I raised an eyebrow. I'd known Chip for years, and he was a solid guy. But the jobs he lined up were usually on the wrong side of legal. I didn't have a problem with that. Usually. But I seemed to be on someone's watchlist.

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As usual I started with the freewrite prompt and used themostdangerouswritingapp.com to write the first five minutes (and then popped it into google docs to check for errors and tidy it up a bit):

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Am so happy for you and that great things are happening through this platform...

Am here with the Weekend freewrite prompt.

Take just one, go solo
This prompt is in mono
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-4-13-2019-single-prompt-option
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Stir up in you the pro
Write the 3-in1 prompt.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-4-11-2019-part-1-the-first-sentence
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Have a nice weekend..