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RE: Five minute free write - canal
You got me confused a bit with referring to the main character with IT instead of HE :) It reminded me of a lord of the rings character :)
Story is very good, but your interpretation afterwards is better. I like the way you think and agree with you on this. We can all win 💚
Hehe, yeah, I could see that. The 'it' referred not to the character, but what he was checking in the back of the craft. Maybe that wasn't clear. Lesson learned :)
Yeah, that whole 'we' thing :)