The Transformation - Five Minute Freewrite

in #freewrite6 years ago

The Transformation

The last detail was complete. Her transformation took months to complete without mishap. Surveying her face in the mirror, she stared critically at her eyes, the strange brown orbs stared back. Her long velvet black hair shone a silky bluish. Nothing like the strawberry blonde she'd known the past 25 years. Pouty lips curled up in a smile. The surgeon was all they promised he'd be. This woman was the furthest from the woman her friends and family remembered.
Jessica, for all intents and purposes, died six months ago. It had to be this way.

She touched her cheek thoughtfully. Life could begin again. Angelica put the final touch of lipstick on those full lips and tossed it in her purse.

The knock on the door signalled her driver. Plane tickets peeked from her black Prada purse. Angelica slipped slender feet into a pair of black high heels and slipped out the back door, pulling it shut with a firm grip and glancing up the road. The road was empty in both directions.

Across the street, a curtain moved to the side for a moment, then fell back in place.


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Thank you, dear. I'm in Canada this weekend, I hope you're having a wonderful weekend.

Now I am so curious about the back-story.... Why did she have to say goodbye to the old Angelica.....

That's a great question!

You are not telling right? Hahaha

I think it's yet to be written!

Hi @wandrnrose7, great writing. Really, I enjoyed reading your post. And I learned some new words from you today. ...Pout lips... and ...she slipped slender her feet into a pair of black high heels..

I will be following next post.

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Thank you very much for your comment and for the resteem.

Here is my first time trying the 5 Min. freewrite https://steemit.com/freewrite/@borges.barilla/five-minutes-free-write-day-one

Still a lot to learn, but I tried my best, I swear : )

Really nice tool. Another lesson learned from you.

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