Wild West - Chapter 8 - Part 2 - 5 minute freewrite challenge

svashta (60)in #freewrite • 6 years ago (edited)

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Chapter 1

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Chapter 2

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Chapter 3
Chapter 4

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Chapter 5

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Chapter 6

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Chapter 7

^{1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7}

Chapter 8

Part 2

Looking around, they spotted several guards around the sides of the lake they hadn't noticed before. Not one person went unguarded and unsupervised, not even for a minute. They were under constant control.

The lake was crowded with men of all ages, all workers working the same shift they were. They all came for a quick bath and to have some fun, too. Some of the guys played ball, some were talking, some swimming, and some just chilled by the shore. Everyone found something to do. Tom and James, for instance, just floated on their backs and relaxed.

With their ears under water they couldn’t hear the masses leaving, and Jimmy had to swim to them and remind them they had to leave for home if they wanted breakfast, else they’ll be late for work. Though their stomachs weren’t rumbling, they obliged. They wanted to feel as fresh as possible for work, because they wanted to plot their escape. They also needed some last minute information from Chuck and his family, and breakfast seemed like a good opportunity, because they wanted to walk to work alone without anyone eavesdropping to their conversation.

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brisby (58) 6 years ago

Nice to see that they were able to relax a bit, if only for a few minutes.

Did you leave out a word in this sentence?

With their ears under water they couldn’t hear the masses leaving, and Jimmy had to swim to them and remind them they had to leave for home if they wanted breakfast, else they’ll be for work.

Sorry, I'm late with your prompt delivery.

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