Weekend Freewrite 4/21/18 (prompts 1-3)

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She loved both her husbands. Nobody knew that Mr. Banson was Gudruns' second husband. They kept it a secret for their own sake. He had helped her bury the first one, after the illness killed him. But what drove her nuts, was the fact that Banson was too easy on Charlotte. She wanted him to toughen up, and be like she is.

Mr. Banson loved her in a way that kept her from wanting to strangle him. The day she met him at the zoo was intense. He had this gaze that make her stomach flinch with need. He knew how to get the special stuff into the food, to change all the little brats into the monsters she knew they were. That is how they started this business of turning everyone non-human.

There was a feeling about the place, but it wasn't what you'd expect. The kids at Keepers Club were constantly being tested. Some began to change, but they act like normal kids. They are taught to read, in a language that would make a normal readers head spin. They all have tubes inserted in the belly, to drain their blood and have it replaced with green goo. The whole process changes their dna to that of a living virus. They will soon enough, go out in search of more human nourishment's, thereby spreading the disease within them. Many trust little children, that is why Gudrun chose them. Nate was a perfect example. They kidnapped him for a few hours, before letting him go. He then infected his parents within a weeks time.

When she and Banson had the perfect virus started, she decided to put some on the stamp on the envelope. Then she wrote her brothers address on it and waited for the mail pick-up. He would think nothing of it, touching the stamp with those evil fingers of his. He collected stamps with cars on them, so she went and bought some. She was not very close to him after she moved away, but she knew he would open the letter and see what non- sense she had to say as an excuse. Only thing she wanted, was to spread the virus across the world.

..These prompts threw me off on how to fit them into my story. Felt more like unless rambling, but we now know more about Gudrun. Can't wait for Chozzy to be back in the mix.
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The prompts may have thrown you but clearly not for long! This is a great backstory and makes me despise Banson and Gudrun even more (I didn't think that was possible..)! I'm SO eager for these two to go down, and hard!

:) I hope either Kelly or Chozzy take them out.

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I enjoy your freewrite. This part sticks out.

He had this gaze that make her stomach flinch with need.

Lol, I have no idea what the heck I even meant by that either. :) Hugs @)-`---

Oh, I think it says so much!

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Oh so evil!!!!

:) that they are.

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