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RE: Blurred - A 5 minute freewrite story
You created some uncommon moments of introspection. I'm not used to read between the many freewrites touches of intimate authenticity like this one:
If only the despair too would have foggy edges, instead of the sharp ones that dug into his soul all the time.
Keep writing, I wish to read you again and welcome!
Thanks! It came on its own but I'm glad it did. It adds a deeper layer to the story, doesn't it?
Thanks for the kind words! :)