Broken to pieces - Weekend Freewrite
After only two month, Helen decided to become an exotic dancer. She had always been a fan of belly dancers, the way they can control their body and seducingly wave their hips hypnotically nailing eyes to the beautiful smooth belly of a dancer with a navel jewelry blinking to the eyes of viewers. What had ultimately got her to make the decision to get to the dancing school's exotic dance line was a friend of hers who she admired; she had been a dancer for all of her life and her glading movement on the ground was almost like floating through the surface.
I decided the only solution was to seduce him. There was no other way; I had to to seduce the teacher in the passing tests to get the place in the school. Whenever I saw him I waved at him and always blinked a little mysterious smile at him while walking by him with a waving but a gentle step, like I was a model trying to disguise in everyday life, slightly failing at it, eminating my spirit what's really underneath leaving only a breathe behind me.
One night Helen was in the school canteen by herself. The unique thing was the way she made tea: using traditional Chinese teapot made of clay. Letting the tea pour over lubricating the dry surface of the tea pot. She circled the water intake hole with the cover but than saw the teacher coming at her, who said: "I'm sorry but you're not qualified."
The shock hit Helen paralyzing her, dropping the clay teapot to the ground which broke into peaces with her having to take a stand on the table starting uncontrollable hyperventilation with tears wetting her eyes.
First weekend freewrite with three individual freewrites that make one story. Individual prompts are on bold.
This longer freewrite was challenging, but a fun one :D
Poor Helen. all her flirting for nothing!!
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-45-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-the-smell-of-a-dumpster
For some reason it just wasn't her day.
Will jump on the next freewrite tomorrow (my tomorrow that is, it's already 10 PM. for me).
ohhhhhhhh what a sad ending :(
Poor Helen!!
which means I loved your story! You made me care :D
Thank YOU for that!
Great that you liked it :D
Poor Helen, but I hope she will keep training, and finally succeed in get place in the school without tricks. ;)
Hopefully she learned her lesson :)
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