The Town That Changed
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6 years ago in #finishthestorycontest by tristancarax (66)
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You are being super productive! Thank you for mentioning my humble contest...you're the best!
lol Your welcome
Wow...literally blow by blow. I could feel every one. Each step, each gory detail--very effective.
Good. That came across as intended. 8-)
Great suspence building, great climax. I liked the head poking up moment, it was unexpected and the perfect element for giving a gloomy direction to the story. Was it his mother's head?
8-) I actually thought it might be Ms. Janken's head. I was thinking that Theo's mum's house was a mile away and he was going to have to go through town to get there. And the I saw a 750 word count with lots more on the way. I began to edit down and ended up with this.
Gosh you make me really wish I had tried to convince @f3nix to up he word count for this one. A brilliant build of suspense and tension, keeping the unknown as just that, for a climatic ending. A very good ending here!
It may have gotten to two thousand words if you did that. 🤨
I wanted to get into creature, but it just didn’t happen. I did a little research on Aunt Hazel, leaving me with plenty of material.
Upping the world count... blasphemy! :-P
What can we sacrifice to you @bananafish ? 8-)
I'm conservative, I'd opt for a couple of virgins during an eclipse 🤔
If I'm finding those, I'm keeping them! lol
I'll stick to the word count. No problem.
Finish the Story Contest - week # 25 is waiting for you, brave storyteller!