Cool direction, He turned into a super-detective of sorts. I enjoyed the mist character and the way you did t-t-ths throughout the piece.
Shana Twain's album sold on three different continents and it worked for her. I think it would be fairly difficult to please 11 or 12; but a few might be a fun exercise. 8-)
I was recently given "Writing the Natural Way". I'm only in the beginning of using the process to write. I love how it works the right side brain. I find my writing far more interesting as of late.
UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments! Do remember Henryk/Marta are one person of two differing identities when it comes down to the situation at hand. Otherwise, I had fun deploying one Myst of the Gang of Four Mysts.
There's only one problem with the album: it's song and it has entirely different guidelines even when it shares some common concerns when dealing with lyrics. You have to worry about the background noise (the one people tend to buy music for), you have to make it attractive to the audience that they'll get hooked into it, you have to play around with it that it feels like a good surprise that later is treated as a nice treat and, for when it comes to lyrics, that the lyrics works with the actual music. (Now it doesn't mean lyrics have to be in sync with the music; lyrics has to be a compliment to the background music so the listener doesn't feel noxious on hearing two different components.) Another problem is: music is there and then another signifier (auditory noise in this case) comes in and takes the spot light. In prose, you can linger on about a word and dance around it like a meta-physician. Regardless, music is easily more infectious especially when it comes to pop music; yet equally yielding to way more particular sub-genres/niches than imagineable.
Just remember both sides of the brain rely on each other and cannot stay independent of each other. For if separated, you create two personalities in one body. So they co/inter-depend on each other!~