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RE: A Thousand Windows

As I continue to read the endings, I continue to see how many of these endings could easily be strung together to form a super ending without the need to retcon any major (or many minor) details. With this as the ultimate endings to many of the endings preceding before it. This as the ultimate send-off of the chapter of Vartan’s return and how his return benefitted the Yerevan people. It really is good that yah displayed the communal nature of Vartan as lived through and enforced because of the horrid Armenian Genocide time. He couldn’t, thanks to a ruling class hanging over him, just be a merchant, he had to help secure his community of Armenians, or he’d not be a sane person thereafter to see them suffer even more. So, even with the interests to keep his spot, he was radicalized to help as much as he could or alleviate as mucj suffering as he could just by recognizing and not wanting to contribute to the pain being created in the World. Lovely story,<3

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I continue to see how many of these endings could easily be strung together to form a super ending without the need to retcon any major (or many minor) details.

I've noticed the very same thing.

I did enjoy writing in the direction this went. I wanted something a little happy and show the city he was living in along with the era. I'm glad someone of kind heart came through.

I had in mind mind originally to write about a stone heist somewhere in the city.

Thanks for reading 8-)

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