Uee hee hee hee!~ A simple chaos that doth land into my eyes do I not stare into it now? Why o why yes do I see a simple numbers game that lended Shannon her safety, for now. It truly is an interesting thing but now enough of my insanity as I crawl into the depths of this post to truly scan what I am seeing here~

La filosofía: Hmm, a decidedly hard one to say as it does have to deal with being on the fence of mere misogyny and the cruel realities that non-males have to face. But by the fact that of her intent of not actually liking what she did, knowledge of her very much still patriarchal World and knowing the baby would've erupted, I shall say it aligns more closely to the harsh-realities of non-males. The fact of our matter coming about in the form that the dæmon baby, which easily could've be the reflection into our World with the self-defense of mothers; which has been more the case in anthropology of human societies than what we are led to believe - especially for those in between the Medieval to Capitalist epoch where many women and non-males (following Feudal-Mercantile standards) had raided entire granaries to feed the community against starvation. So the dæmon-baby in this story is rather the payback against the misogynistic and sexual violence on women, it very much taps into the repressed elements of history which has been boiling now for the last few decades. Especially with the crook's/creep's death being the signal of freedom against a form of bondage that had kept her down and now allows her to take care of something she does care for.

La forma: If I strike only one wrong, it's that "skirts" should be changed to "skirt" - lest she really had many skirts. Other than that, I love the usage of italics for dialogue (despite the usual dialogue marker of quotation marks being there). The usage of actions as to develop our scene and tension, especially when we didn't knew but could guess what Shannon's weapon was - a dramatic irony in reverse that gets unwound by the sentences. Truly, I am infatuated with a deep love with how we don't get to see bloody murder but we still do - all because Shannon closed her eyes which maintains the third-person limited perspective. In the end, LA FIN!~