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RE: Noir or not?

UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments!

My writing style is a direct hatred for the “show, don’t tell” rule and how much I think showing is just a more eloquent way of telling; if I wanted to show, I can sketch a story up now. I always decided to dig myself deep in dialogue when I just feel disgusted with the “show, don’t tell” rule. But I appreciate that people love what I write down. After all, I play the role as Jester and try to keep the audience’s attention while making them as free as they can be to see what I see.

On the positive direction: not a wrong reading, not wrong at all. But that’s more due to my undying pessimism of things staying the way they are without giving way to radical change or a pathway to its grave. As to relate to Ms Marta: she picked herself up and fights a hopelessly courageous uphill battle against all that keeps her down (as I would refer to breakdown of Dysfunctions that kept an Order around with all its pains). Or to die of overdose which has acted as a less painful method ‘n’ had drowned out all the other greater pains of Life (or as I call, the tragedy of the Dysfunction). Of course, all contradictions are eternal but never have to be faced alone and will require others with the overcoming/supersessions of these struggles. Ms Marta could’ve eventually triumphed from her lowest point but has had her recovery catalyzed with Blue Myst of White-Flame (I would get Lacanian here, but this is now her Other as another Subject).

If yah want to, this is @vermillionfox’s recent contest addition here right now.

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Thank you...an intriguing image.

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