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RE: Finish The Story Contest - WEEK #30! My Entry
I really like the fact that you wanted to give a hope of salvation to the orcs. The reader of the first part written by @dirge is led to empathize with them, but to fear for their probable defeat, so it is a liberating catharsis to read the description of the miraculous force of Yog-Sothoth that allows Shog to open a crevasse in the ground with the hammer and defeat the enemies.