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RE: Unclean Desires... A Finish The Story Contest Entry
This is an interesting direction for the story to go in. Was he not worried about disturbing the child while he groped the woman?
I enjoyed the twist at the end, the child / little devil creature changing, Shannon closing her eyes during it.
What was the package he never got to see? and was the debt simply filling the child's hunger?