I liked how you developed a totally different concept, although I'm not sure that this may fall under the category of a second part of the story ;-) Yes, more or less, comes a point when you crash against the stupid prejudices and narrow mind of institutions and status quo protectors.. There would be a lot to say about but, at least, this contest can contribute a bit in opening everyone's mind through an exercise of creativity. Well done, Tristan!
Yes, my part definitely borders on the line. 8-)
Thanks.