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RE: Unclean Desires... A Finish The Story Contest Entry
yo this was dope.
By the time he noticed the movement beside him, and turned to see, it was too late. Blue eyes had become red, claws and sharp teeth an inch away from him.
this guy was a creep from the start.
and the way you killed him was pleasant, and surprising. I didn't expect it.
good stuff!