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RE: Pirate Hunters - Finish the Story Week #35
you set up the story with mystery (spoons?). There's so much imagery (brine, blood). I was pulled in, as a reader, because I wanted to see what the spoons were.
handmade makeshift grenades? cool. An exciting story
Thanks, Dirge! 😎 Glad that you were pulled in and happy to give some excitement. I hadn't read of stinkpots before doing research for this contest. The shrapnel and disgusting muck from the pots were so awful that many pirates would choose to jump overboard when one of those hit the deck.