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RE: Let's make a deal [my entry to Finish the Story Contest - Week #43!]
Happy to see you writing with us again, Vasigo! 😎
Great idea to have the Master Grower's finger dance with her tablet be a countermeasure against the corrupt Musashi! I liked that you brought in a deeper history between the two, one that turned bitter with his poor performance, sexist attitude and side smuggling. Good riddance to that Colonel!
I didn't think of making two stories in one. Looks like I've done something more interesting than I wanted to. I just wanted to make both of them to be bad.
I'm glad you like the story.
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