Dinner is served - Entry to the fifty word story challenge by jayna
Under the shade of the willow tree they will find your, as always, meticulously dressed body; minus one minor detail. Hours laboured in the kitchen regularly ending in tears under your snarling disapproval. "bet your mother never did this" I say shoving your honey basted head in the waiting oven.
Writing notes:
This was written for the fifty word story challenge by @jayna. Prompt was Shade -picture is mine ...
(Image credit Dave Renike and a portrait of the fair jubilee made by myself turned into this here universal truth meme)
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art courtesy of @PegasusPhysics
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Oh my, @tygertyger, this is powerful... and gruesome. I suppose @ablaze is right that it could be interpreted more than one way. But...
...leads me to believe we are talking about a crime here, vs. a culinary venture. It makes me think of the show Dexter which was about a really nice guy who also happened to be a serial killer and chose victims he believed to be deserving of an untimely end.
Crime ? Maybe but then did he not deserve it ;)
Yes, perhaps! As I said, it reminds me of Dexter. Have you seen it?
Yes, but I was unhappy how they concluded the series ...
I didn't watch it all the way to the end. It seemed to be losing it's edge and fizzling out!
yeah I missed a few seasons but came for the last which was not bad until they killed off his sister and sent him to live a sad life alone in Alaska...
What?? The sister dies? Okay now I’m really glad I didn’t follow it to its conclusion. But then again, how does one successfully wrap up such a series?
Happy ever after on a ranch in Mexico him growing wine and fertilising it with bad guys lol
So many ways to interpret this one! A sign of great writing... Is it a head of broccoli or her husbands head? Who knows...
:D
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Another great read. Thanks for sharing.
whew. im hoping thats a chicken. but maybe its not? a mushroom?
I am a radical vegan, unlikely a chicken my dear ;)
I typed chicken. Whew i wrote that first thing waking up after waking up from restless sleep.
I meant to write "is that a child or mushroom?" The ambiguity of the story makes it unclear if its horror or not. I enjoyed it
:O)
Wow! Harsh! Compelling!
😄😇😄
:)
This is quite a scene. I had one view of it, and than I read all the comments... I was left unsure in what the story talks about, but one thing is certain, story leaves a strong impression.
Great job!
Ty :)
Hansel and Gretel meet Psycho :)
Great story.
;)