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RE: "Desafío Steemit s26wk1: El Proyecto de Oficina"

in #fiction-s26wk111 months ago

I love how the discovery of the “mutation project” happened in such an unexpected and almost accidental way! The secrecy, late-night lab work, and quiet determination of the team added a strong sense of suspense. The moment when the sick chimpanzee was cured felt like a big emotional win, and it made the ending so satisfying. I also liked how you tied their personal ambition to a larger mission of saving human lives. If anything, I think it could have been even more intense if the story showed more obstacles or moral dilemmas they faced before deciding to reveal the project. Still, the pace, the teamwork, and the breakthrough made it a great, impactful story.

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Hola muchas gracias por tu comentario tan bien explicado que pena no haber escrito lo que esperabas pero lo tomaré en cuenta para futuras ediciones

You welcome, it was a good read.

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