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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Week 5: Season 24: The Mysterious Passenger
It sounds a bit too much like AI. I never saw you write like this. Are you a writer? I expected a different word choice of a native speaker. It might have added more charm.
Sorry, I lost my focus. The word "angel" and I don't work well. I always throw them away if they are in a box with ornamemts to decorate the tree. It's the same with cupid (posture) LOL
I have no idea what this writing contest is about but unlike @senehasa I see parts of text I can't rhyme. Can be because I edit texts the entire day.
Example: the ghetto fellow sobbed, more tears rolling down from her eye
And what does the last sentence mean? Can you describe it to me in other/your own words?
It sounds like doesn't mean it is, that's why i gave you that mention, i knew it would put a shiver down your spines, don't be perplexed by the quotation and arrangement,
Your dislikes are numerous, i wish you have more likes than the later
Have you ever seen me drew the way i did, a different approach to my writing style should make you see the creativity in me, rather than...... , when it's comes to challenges more effort should be placed.
I would appreciate if you'd read again, you can skim through the terrestial part, but as far my writing is concern, it is centered on something mysterical, a passenger coming from a country that doesn't exist is an angel.
To be a bit concised and in summary,
prayers brought the angel back due to an incomplete mission, main reason why his documents and passport changed on the counter..
You know what? I read again if I have more time. Thanks for your reply and pointing this out. Who knows I like it if I read it a bit more often.
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😁, try to be more intentional ma'am
Hier laat de taal mij in de steek 🤔
Hmmm🤔
Any piece you can't grasp let me know, it's my work, i can reexplain but only if you promise never to skim through, 'cause you'd miss the full gist👌