LOVE LIKE HIS : Chapter 21 – A PRAYER FOR A FRIEND, & A PRAYER FOR AN ENEMY – An Original Story by @papa-pepper
CHAPTER 21: A PRAYER FOR A FRIEND, & A PRAYER FOR AN ENEMY
When Gary had dropped Ray off after the library, Ray had definitely calmed down a bit, but he was more or less a wreck. This whole situation with the detective was really getting to him.
If Cromwell was willing to kill them over it, then perhaps Ray’s reaction to the situation was valid.
However, Ray was a believer now, and death was inevitable anyway. Whether Cromwell got to them or not, soon both of them would be dead anyway. From there, the options were limited.
In Gary’s opinion, Ray just need a more eternal perspective.
It was that thought that Gary was contemplating now. Yes, Ray was still a younger believer, but not having the proper view of the situation was eating him up inside, and, if left un-remedied, it would soon begin to take its toll on Ray’s physical health.
Of course, Cromwell also needed to have a better perspective on things, but Gary knows that his own influence is extremely limited, so he bows his head to pray.
“Lord, I have no idea what we’ve gotten ourselves here, but I know that You have allowed and somehow You can use it. O must admit, I’m pretty concerned about what is going on right now too, but mostly I’m concerned about Ray… and Detective Cromwell.”
“Father, please draw Ray ever closer unto Yourself right now, and comfort him in this desperate time. He needs Your help and Your peace, or this will really start to eat him up. I know that he’s younger in the faith than some others, but help him to see things properly, so that he can have the proper perspective on things.”
“As I look back and reflect on our history together, I can’t believe what You’ve already done. You know that Julia meant the world to me, and I was so eagerly looking forward to our future together. Yet, in one brief moment all that was taken away from me, Lord, and you have helped me to cope with that situation incredibly well.”
“You know that I desired to give up and call it quits, but You reminded me that You have left me here because You still have plans and purposes for me upon this earth. I thank You for helping me to forgive Ray, and not only to forgive him, but to befriend and love him too.”
“I cry out to You now on his behalf, Lord, please take this burden from him. Help him not to fear, but to trust in You, and to be overwhelmed by Your peace, Father.”
“I also lift up Detective Cromwell to you.”
“I know some of what he’s been through, but You know it all. He too lost his wife, and a child. My heart breaks as I see how he has attempted to cope with the situation.”
“Father, this too You can use and work together for good. Please, be drawing him unto Yourself now and working in this situation. I know that You already are.”
“We both know that Cromwell needs You, and he needs to be forgiven. He’s destroying his own life by rejecting You, and will soon wind up destroying his eternal soul too.”
“Lord, I fear that his time is running out, as he can’t keep living his life this way.”
Gary pauses, and reflects on the occurrences from the past week.
“Please Lord, forgive him for all of his inappropriate actions too, and for putting the gun against my head and threatening to kill me. I know what would have happened to me if he had actually went through with it, but I fear for what would have happened to him.”
“I thank you, Lord, and ask that you watch over and protect us all this weekend, and help Ray to do a good job when he starts his job on Monday. Thank you, Father. Amen.”
Gary rises and walks to the front window.
He doesn’t expect to see Cromwell, and really isn’t thinking about what he’s doing.
Yet, there he is, peeping out from in-between the blinds like he’s paranoid.
“Hopefully Ray will be able to sleep well tonight,” Gary thinks as he turns out the living room light and heads back towards his bedroom.
THE END OF CHAPTER 21
TO READ THE PREVIOUS CHAPTERS, CLICK BELOW:
CHAPTER 1: INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER 2: THE FUNERAL
CHAPTER 3: MONDAY, & FREEDOM
CHAPTER 4: TUESDAY
CHAPTER 5: INTERROGATION
CHAPTER 6: PROBATION
CHAPTER 7: RAY’S TURN
CHAPTER 8: ICE CREAM
CHAPTER 9: LATE NIGHT
CHAPTER 10: WRESTLING
CHAPTER 11: THURSDAY: MORE QUESTIONS
CHAPTER 12: WHAT HAPPENED?
CHAPTER 13: PHONE CALLS
CHAPTER 14: GAME OVER
CHAPTER 15: DRINKING & DARKNESS
CHAPTER 16: GOOD MORNING
CHAPTER 17: FRIDAY - THE CAPTAIN
CHAPTER 18: THE LIBRARY
CHAPTER 19: GUN, AND A PARKING LOT
CHAPTER 20: THE SITUATION ESCALATES
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LOVE LIKE HIS - Capítulo 21
Did you ever read The Cross and the Switchblade? Your story is sort of in that genre and reminds me of it.
I've seen the movie...
Thank you for continuing this story.
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Man, I really regret not being able to read this story as the chapters come. You have such an underrated grasp of the written word. This story has been unfolding really nicely, and the bite-sized chapters really do it justice. You're such a character, and it's really refreshing to read your literary turn. Great work, man!
Have you backed up and read from the beginning?
I've read from the beginning before, but I've been missing the chapters as they come, so I backtrack to the last chapter I previously read.
I think they will be coming more quickly now until it finishes.