I like your writing style. The chapters are bite-sized but pack a lot in a little space. Each one ends with suspense so you want to see what happens next!
One thing in this chapter...
The other room looked directly at the General Store.
"room" or should it be "window"? I'm thinking window but I could be mistaken. Looking forward to chapter 5!
Yes I noticed this as well and fixed it around the same time you commented.