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RE: The Martyr (Revenge of Yayo Che)... A finish the story contest entry

in #fiction6 years ago

The king of twists! This is interesting for how you build the tension between the two characters in the first scene and of course the final revelation. I wouldn't be surprised about such betrayals when it's about narco dollars .. well done my friend 👍

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