'Giving up gifts' a very deep words @d-pend, that's cool. I have heard in Dsound, you read it full of feelings and penetrate into the soul. With you reading like that, I'm sure people who hear it will love your poetry and can be the most beautiful thing for them all.

I walk my way
Likewise also you
Walk your way
But God brings us together

I see my way
Likewise also you
Seeing your way
But God has united us

For we can besatu
In joy and sorrow
Nothing else I can say
You are the most beautiful gift of my life