Welcome to week 4:
" Searching for lost pets classifieds"
Entry N° 2 ✍

Hi, @dove11
First, I apologize for the delay in presenting the results. Several circumstances have occurred, including disasters suffered by some friends and acquaintances caused by the rains.

Pet: 13-week-old Golden Labra puppy A beautiful story that immediately connects us with the problem. You achieve a good characterization of the girl, thanks to the amount of details you provide.
I can understand why the girl thinks it's fantastic, but the magic of the puppy needs to be described more. A touching ending.