Hi, @sbamsoneu
Impressive and very powerful.

Please clarify:

1. Where does your story end, and where does the explanation begin?
2. Do you need to explain your shortstory to the reader?

The ancestral leopard spirit, I wouldn't do that, I would just roar and let the rest react as they wish, what do you think?

I don't want to evaluate yet.
Please just delimit with a line or mark, where exactly the story ends.

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