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RE: CONTEST: "The keyword of the week" / LOST || Memories of an unexpected awakening.
You almost had me there; I was so absorbed in the story that I truly thought Jon was going to die. I completely forgot about the image that clued the reader into his rescue!
Hola amiga. It's nice to know that you liked the story. Well, that's what I tried to do as I was building the story in my mind and the words were coming out.... I was even careful with the title to keep the expectation, but I think I chose the wrong image, not because it doesn't fit, but because it served as a foreshadowing of the ending and that's what I tried to avoid as I wrote.... Something I realized after publishing. I still have a lot to learn, but there I go trying to be a little bit better each time demanding myself. It was nice to read your comment.
The storytelling is so good that the picture doesn't matter anymore.