"plum cobbler" a five minute freewrite

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This is the freewrite challenge. I am using @mariannewest’s #freewrite prompt to write this piece (https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-660-5-minute-freewrite-sunday-prompt-plum-cobbler)

Today’s prompt is:

plum cobbler

This is part Sixty Seven of my current freewrite series - I’m calling it RatsNest for now - (posted daily Monday - Saturday).
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Kelly took a deep breath and pushed the plug into the socket. For a moment nothing happened and Kelly thought the machine was broken and then there was a click, a thud and a whirling noise and the machine began to shake.

Kelly stood up and went to watch the machine. She expected to see it sort seeds, or something like that, but she saw nothing at all. What she did notice was a wonderful smell. She inhaled deeply. It reminded her of her grandmother's kitchen. She took another deep breath.

Plum cobbler!

That is what it smelled like! She looked over the machine to see if she could find the source of the smell (her stomach was making gurgling noises and her mouth was watering at the smell: she realised she was hungry!) but she couldn't see anything.

The machine shuddered and made a noise that sounded a little bit like a crow playing the trombone, it shuddered again and then hiccoughed and stopped doing anything. Oh, Kelly thought. I've broken it.

There was another banging noise. This time it was coming from the door.

As usual, I started with the freewrite prompt and used themostdangerouswritingapp.com to write the first five minutes (and then popped it into google docs to check for errors and tidy it up a bit):

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I'm wanting this poor girl to get out of the room! Good for you to keep going with your story, @felt.buzz. Excellent dedication with all the crazy prompts. And here is your next one:


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This is a perfect way to use the prompt.
I wanted to try but couldn't find a way to relate the story that I've started to write.